As you saw in the last chapter (Episode 36), we have officially reached the end of childhood and the beginning of adolescence. I know it has taken some time, but it was necessary. I am not looking to write a short fanfic since this is a long-term project. Just like the original work I am basing this on, it seeks to represent the slow burn and weight of human development and events.
With that in mind, I wanted to take this Sunday to share something personal regarding how the path I have taken here has helped me improve as a writer. I used to be the kind of person who invented worlds, characters, and lore in my head but never managed to capture them in a solid narrative. Now that I am writing this story, I finally understand how it works.
This is why I wanted to share this message. I spent so much time thinking I wasn't capable of even putting together an odyssey. However, as time passes and I write every word, I realize that I am capable. The only thing I lack is experience because I already have your attention. Every comment and visit pushes me forward.
Enough sentimentality, so let's talk about corrections.
I have made it clear many times that I have improved some chapters. Episode 9 received the most work since I managed to change it quite a bit, specifically regarding the chaotic POV in the original. It now has a much cleaner perspective that clarifies exactly why Daiki leaves. I removed his defeat by Paul (which I honestly didn't like) and focused instead on a potential defeat. Remember that Paul was a bit rusty at that moment, and in the world of the sword, analysis and thought are crucial to being a better swordsman. It was only a matter of time before he would win through technique, but it was also evident that staying in Buena Village would cost him the potential for biological growth that we only get once.
Regarding the Roa arc, I am aware it was very short. At the time, I didn't have much time and wanted to get ahead in the plot. As a beginner, I made the mistake of omitting events such as Daiki teaching Ghislaine reading, writing, and arithmetic, or the time they took Eris to the market. I understand now that those moments were necessary to justify young Eris falling in love. Although I tried to remedy this with "Eris's Anomaly" and think the dynamic has improved since the reunion in Millis, I am open to adding new content to that arc. Regardless, I am still proud of Turning Point 2.
That is all for now. Thank you for accompanying me in this first great prologue of the story. I hope to live up to what comes next.
I would be very happy if you left a comment because it helps the platform notice the story and perhaps recommend it to more people. That would only drive me to improve even more.
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