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Chapter 1 - DETENTION

A Psychological Thriller Novel

ARC: 1 The Transfer

Every school has secrets.

The rain fell in thin, silver lines the morning Jake transferred to Westbridge High. The building stood like a concrete monument to routine — lockers, fluorescent lights, whispered gossip.

But the whispers changed when he walked in.

New kid.

Jake kept his head down. He had learned that much already.

Inside the classroom, the teacher barely looked up from attendance.

"Empty seat. Next to Mia."

The name caused a shift in the air.

Mia sat by the window. Dark hair. Still posture. Eyes that didn't move when he sat down.

But before the bell rang, she spoke — soft enough that only he could hear.

"You shouldn't have come here."

Jake felt it then.

This wasn't a warning.

It was a fact.

The List

The note was waiting for him the next morning.

Folded once. Placed neatly inside his desk.

STAY AWAY FROM HER.

He didn't react. Didn't look surprised.

Instead, he looked at Mia.

She was smiling faintly at something on her phone.

Across the room, Noah leaned back in his chair — watching.

Their eyes met.

Noah's smile widened slowly.

Jake understood something in that moment.

The note wasn't protection.

It was bait.

Detention

Jake was accused of cheating three days later.

The evidence was perfect.

Too perfect.

He didn't argue when he was sent to detention.

The room was empty.

Except for Mia.

The door locked automatically with a metallic click.

The lights flickered.

Mia didn't look scared.

"You really don't understand what kind of place this is," she said calmly.

Jake leaned back in his chair.

"I'm starting to."

The Disappearance

A student vanished on Friday.

No police announcement.

No counselor visit.

No assembly.

On Monday, it was like he had never existed.

Jake stared at the class photo on the wall.

One face had been scratched out.

Deliberately.

Mia stood behind him.

"Stop digging," she said.

Jake didn't turn around.

"Why?"

"Because the more you see, the less safe you are."

Noah

Noah approached him during lunch.

Friendly tone. Cold eyes.

"You like mysteries?"

Jake shrugged.

Noah leaned closer.

"Be careful. Curiosity is fatal here."

Jake smiled slightly.

"Only if you're afraid of what you'll find."

Noah's grin deepened.

Good.

He liked this one.

The Basement

Jake followed Mia after school.

She entered a part of the building that didn't exist on official maps.

Basement hallway.

Flickering lights.

A locked metal door.

She unlocked it.

Jake waited until she disappeared inside.

Through the crack in the door, he saw it.

Files.

Photos.

Names.

Crossed out.

Some circled.

Some underlined in red.

Mia's voice echoed from inside the room.

"You can come in now."

Jake froze.

She had known the whole time.

The Truth

"You think I'm the villain?" she asked quietly.

Jake stepped inside.

The walls were covered in timelines.

Disappearance patterns.

Vote percentages.

He looked at her.

"You're choosing them."

"No."

She stepped closer.

"I'm predicting them."

He felt something colder than fear.

The missing students weren't random.

They were selected.

The Game

Noah found them in the hallway that evening.

"You both broke the rules," he said casually.

Jake folded his arms. "What rules?"

Noah smiled.

"The game started before you transferred."

"What game?"

Noah's voice dropped.

"Survival."

Betrayal

Jake confronted Mia after discovering her hidden notebook.

Names written days before they vanished.

"You're choosing them."

"No," she said again.

Silence.

"I'm saving one."

She looked at him.

Jake didn't know whether to feel protected—

Or targeted.

Checkmate

At the school assembly, the principal cleared his throat.

"Next selected student… Jake Miller."

The room went silent.

Jake felt every pair of eyes turn toward him.

Noah smiled.

Mia stood abruptly.

"I choose him."

The air shifted.

Noah whispered as Jake stared ahead—

"Let's see who protects you now."

Black.

ARC: 2 The Player

Jake hadn't transferred by accident.

He had researched Westbridge for months.

His older brother had disappeared here.

The school had buried it.

But Jake didn't bury things.

He uncovered them.

Noah revealed the hidden voting system.

Anonymous.

Cruel.

Efficient.

Students voted.

The most voted name became Selected.

Disappearances were staged at first.

Then someone began killing the selected students before they vanished.

The game evolved.

Mia admitted she manipulated votes.

To protect him.

Jake discovered the admin account belonged to him.

Inherited from his brother.

The system's creator.

He wasn't the victim.

He was legacy.

On the rooftop, with sirens in the distance, Jake deleted the voting website publicly.

Phones buzzed across campus.

Game terminated.

Noah laughed.

"You think this ends because you deleted a website?"

Another student's phone buzzed.

You've been selected.

No link.

No vote.

Just fear.

ARC:3 The Architect

The messages spread without a platform.

Copycats emerged.

Students accusing students.

Power without structure.

Mia revealed the original system was a psychological experiment.

Started by early students.

Including Jake's brother.

Jake found the recording.

His brother stared into the camera.

"If you're watching this… end it properly."

Noah admitted the truth.

"I didn't start it," he said.

"I perfected it."

Fear didn't need code.

It needed people.

The police exposed the system.

The school shut down temporarily.

But rumors survived.

Because fear is easier than truth.

Mia confessed publicly.

Took the blame.

The mystery faded.

And with it—

The power.

Then Jake found the failsafe.

One final automatic vote.

Admin: Jake.

If he did nothing, someone would die.

If he chose a name—

He became the system.

On the rooftop, storm raging, Noah watched him.

"Choose."

Jake opened the final command field.

He typed slowly.

Not a student.

Not Noah.

Not himself.

He typed:

THE SYSTEM

He deleted everything permanently.

Released all hidden files publicly.

Exposed every name.

Every vote.

Every manipulation.

Phones buzzed one last time.

System permanently terminated.

No selected name.

Just truth.

Silence

Weeks later, the school reopened.

No more disappearances.

No more messages.

Noah was arrested.

Still smiling.

"Fear doesn't need a website," he told Jake.

Jake sat in class.

The seat beside him empty.

Mia had transferred.

Rain tapped against the window.

His phone vibrated.

Unknown number.

Do you feel safe now?

Jake looked at the message for a long time.

Then he deleted it.

Placed the phone face down.

And did nothing.

Because fear only wins—

When you play.

END