Death Scene
Eryndor is dying.
His body is collapsing from within.
Shadows crack through his veins.
The Starved God's voice overlaps with his thoughts.
Reality begins to tear apart.
Important emotional beats:
He regrets nothing.
He refuses to surrender.
He realizes death may not free him. If I cannot kill you… then I will drag you into oblivion with me."
Then—
Everything shatters.
Silence.
🌑 2. The Void
He awakens in nothingness.
Describe:
Endless dark ocean
Floating fragments of memory
Broken thrones drifting
Whispers of forgotten gods
The Starved God speaks differently now — calmer, colder.
Revelation:
"You are no longer mortal."
"You are no longer free."
"We begin again."
Then something pulls him downward.
Like falling through worlds.
3. Reincarnation
Hard cut.
He wakes up in pain.
Different body.
Weaker body.
Maybe:
A beaten outer sect disciple
A slave miner in a spiritual stone cave
A dying orphan in a cultivation village
Make it humiliating.
He tries to move — body barely responds.
Add world details:
Floating mountains
Swords flying in the sky
Spiritual energy in the air
People talking about realms
He overhears something like:
"That useless Qi Gathering trash is still alive?"
Now readers understand:
He's in a cultivation world.
4. Power System Introduction (Natural, Not Info Dump)
Reveal through observation.
For example:
He senses energy in the air.
Someone nearby circulates Qi and the air vibrates.
He instinctively tries the same.
But—
Something is wrong.
Instead of absorbing Qi normally…
It bends toward him.
Hungry.
Afraid.
The Starved God whispers:
"This world feeds on energy…We feed on worlds."
Now introduce cultivation levels subtly:
Body Tempering
Qi Gathering
Foundation Establishment
Core Formation
Nascent Soul
Immortal Ascension
Maybe he learns he's stuck at lowest level.
But…
Something unnatural awakens.
5. First Manifestation of Devouring
This is your chapter highlight.
Someone bullies him.
Pushes him.
Hits him.
And in that moment—
His hunger reacts.
He doesn't consciously do it.
But—
The bully's Qi starts draining.
Slowly.
Then violently.
The air darkens.
The bully collapses.
Others panic.
Eryndor realizes:
He didn't cultivate.
He consumed.
The Starved God whispers:
"No meditation required."
6. Internal Conflict (Important!)
Make it clear:
He is terrified of himself.
He doesn't want to become a monster.
But power feels good.
Too good.
Let his thoughts clash with the god's.
Example structure:
Eryndor: "I won't become your puppet."
God: "You already breathe because of me."
7. End With Strong Hook (Very Important)
He looks at his reflection and sees shadow behind his eyes.
The Starved God says:
"This realm has immortals…I wonder how they taste."