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Chapter 5 - Chapter 5 — Correction

Instability did not announce itself loudly.

It showed up in delays.

He noticed it when his foot slipped on stone he had frozen himself. The ice should have held. It had the density. The angle was correct.

It failed anyway.

The slip cost him balance. Balance cost him time. Time in Hell was paid for in flesh.

Something struck him from the side before he finished recovering—a barbed mass of muscle and heat that tore into his flank and carried him across the tunnel wall. Bone cracked on impact. His vision dimmed briefly as his head struck stone.

He did not try to stand.

Standing was inefficient.

He rolled instead, letting momentum pull him low as a hooked claw skimmed across where his throat had been. The creature—broad, many-jointed, its skin ridged like layered scars—overextended. He seized the opening and drove his fist into its knee.

Cold followed the motion without permission.

Too fast.

The joint froze solid, locking at the wrong angle. The creature howled as its weight continued forward and the leg shattered beneath it. Bone burst through skin, fragments snapping outward, blood spraying thick and dark before crystallizing in the air.

The sound drew others.

Three more shapes moved in the dark—different outlines, different gaits. One skittered, too many limbs scraping stone. Another dragged itself upright on overlong arms, its torso twisted wrong. The third walked with heavy certainty, heat rolling off it in waves that made frost recoil.

Different species.

Different variables.

He adjusted.

He grabbed the broken-legged demon by the head and twisted hard. The neck resisted, then tore free in a wet spiral of tissue and snapped cord. The body collapsed immediately, still kicking.

He dragged the corpse forward and shoved it into the path of the skittering thing.

It leapt.

It landed wrong.

The frozen blood on the corpse shattered under its weight, shards punching up into the softer underside of its body. It shrieked as its momentum carried it forward, impaling itself repeatedly before collapsing into a spasming heap.

Two left.

The heat-heavy demon charged, ignoring the mess, its skin glowing brighter as it accelerated. He felt the temperature spike and knew trying to freeze it outright would kill him.

So he didn't.

He stepped aside and caught its arm as it passed, fingers biting deep into heated flesh. He held the contact deliberately short.

Heat Bleed.

Not named yet. Not stable. But the concept held.

The demon stumbled as warmth drained unevenly from its arm, muscle faltering mid-stride. He followed through, slammed his shoulder into its ribs, and felt something give. He drove a claw between the plates of its chest and tore sideways.

The ribcage peeled open. Organs spilled, steaming violently.

He froze them mid-fall.

The sudden halt ruptured what heat remained. The demon collapsed forward, dead before it hit the ground.

The last one hesitated.

That hesitation was born of pattern failure.

He advanced, slower now, breathing measured despite the pain in his side where bone ground against bone. The skittering demon tried to retreat, limbs scrambling.

He did not rush.

He placed his hand flat against the ground and pressed cold downward.

It spread shallow and wide, frosting stone just enough to slick it.

The demon slipped.

He seized it mid-fall and slammed its head repeatedly into the frozen stone until the skull softened, then gave way. Blood pooled and froze into a shallow basin around the shattered remains.

Silence returned.

He stood alone amid dismembered bodies, chest rising and falling carefully. Blood coated his legs in dark, frozen sheets. One of his ribs protruded visibly from his side, cracked through skin and rimed white.

He examined it.

The bone had fractured cleanly but at the wrong angle. Regeneration would correct the break—but incorrectly.

That would affect movement.

He did not wait.

He grabbed the exposed rib and snapped it the rest of the way free. The pain hit hard enough to drop him briefly to one knee, vision flaring white.

He froze the wound immediately.

Blood sealed. Muscle locked in place around absence.

He would force it to regrow properly later.

Correction required intervention.

He dragged the bodies into a rough pile and fed selectively, avoiding overheated flesh that would spike his core too quickly. He tore muscle, crushed bone for marrow, swallowed organs still warm enough to be useful.

As he fed, he adjusted his internal pressure deliberately, slowing intake, spacing each bite.

The cold responded better.

Not cleanly.

But better.

When regeneration resumed, it did so under constraint. The missing rib regrew slower, thicker, setting deeper into reinforced cartilage. His side stiffened, movement limited—but stable.

Stability was worth stiffness.

He tested his arm again.

The forearm still bore hairline fractures where backlash had snapped it earlier. He forced ice into the gaps, not to freeze, but to hold shape.

It worked.

The limb moved. Pain persisted. Function returned.

He flexed his claws and felt resistance—not weakness, but density.

Something was changing.

Not evolution.

Correction.

He moved on before more arrived.

Traveling wounded taught him efficiency faster than survival ever had. Every step was chosen. Every motion accounted for the damage it would aggravate.

He avoided open spaces.

He avoided heat vents.

He avoided unnecessary fights.

Not from fear.

From calculation.

When he did fight again—later, against a pair of scavengers fighting over a corpse—he restrained his ice deliberately, letting one tear into his thigh before responding.

Pain clarified timing.

He froze the wound first this time.

Cold Seal.

The blood stopped instantly. Pain dulled to pressure. The ice did not spread further.

That was new.

He did not name it aloud.

He remembered it.

He killed the scavengers efficiently—one with a frozen elbow snapped backward, the other with a crushed throat—and fed lightly, enough to compensate without destabilizing.

When he moved again, his leg held.

Barely.

Hours later, crouched in a shallow hollow, he attempted shaping deliberately.

He extended cold into his palm and pushed.

Ice formed.

Not a spike. Not a plate.

A rough wedge, uneven and jagged.

It cracked as soon as he applied pressure.

Backlash ran up his arm, freezing muscle fibers and locking his elbow painfully. He tore the ice free before it could root deeper and hissed as sensation returned in burning waves.

Too complex.

He tried again later, shaping less.

A thin ridge this time.

It held for a second longer before failing.

He repeated this over and over, breaking ice, breaking himself, correcting position, adjusting pressure, recording failure.

By the time he stopped, his hands were numb, muscles shredded beneath frozen seals, but something fundamental had shifted.

Ice no longer rushed blindly.

It waited.

That night, as he fed again and forced regeneration to work under cold rather than heat alone, a realization settled into him—not sudden, not dramatic.

This body would never be safe.

That was acceptable.

Safety was inefficient.

What mattered was predictability.

Instability could be measured.

Damage could be corrected.

Ice could be forced to obey—not fully, not yet, but enough to begin defining boundaries.

He lay back against the stone, frost tracing faint patterns beneath him, and breathed shallowly through lungs that still ached from freezing.

Tomorrow—if time still applied—he would test limits again.

Not to grow stronger.

To reduce error.

And in Hell, reducing error was the only form of progress that lasted.

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