Hey guys, Night_Rider567 here. Chapter 5 of the Hiccup/Hela mythic fic is now posted, which means our initial five-chapter flight is complete. You've seen the hidden garden, felt the tension, and witnessed the first steps of this forbidden connection.
Now, I'm turning the mic over to you. This was always about gauging interest and seeing what you think.
· Hit me with your highs and lows. What moments made you pause or re-read? What fell flat?
· Do these two characters and their twisted, mythic dynamic have you hooked? Is there a "need to know what happens next" feeling, or did it feel more like a satisfying, self-contained "what if"?
· Be brutally honest. Praise is fantastic, but constructive criticism is pure gold for a writer.
Your comments and reblogs/reviews will be the deciding factor on whether this remains a compelling vignette or expands into a much larger saga. Thank you for reading!