Good evening/day
I just got home from work and started thinking about the next chapter. I started writing and in the end I came to the conclusion that the next chapters may not be to everyone's liking, since I decided to use a historical event that could make things controversial, but I ask for your patience.
The simplest way I can describe my experience right now is as if I were on a boat, surrounded by fog. I know my destination, but the route is unknown, so I have to navigate carefully.So I apologize in advance for anything I do wrong.
I also changed the way I write a little, based on a reader's suggestion about how to distinguish who is speaking. If you prefer it this way, let me know.
Don't think I'll finish the third chapter today. I came home tired from work, so I decided to use this to talk a little about my intentions for future chapters.
-I've been asked about Kael's love interest. At the moment, I haven't decided anything, but I think it will have to be someone connected to the Cullens to facilitate the connection of the story later on. So, in my opinion, the choice would be between one of the Cullens, one of the Denali sisters, or someone from school later on. (That doesn't mean he won't connect with other characters throughout the story, just that he won't find the one who completes him anytime soon). It's still too early to reach a conclusion.
-As for the Volturi, I have no intention of having Kael confront them directly, as that would be asking for an early death. However, I do intend to have them on opposite sides.
-Following the short arc in Rome that I'm working on now, I'm thinking of a training arc, so I'll have to find someone to teach him.
-The time jumps should become smaller because I intend to put Kael through some events I have in mind, which you may enjoy.
-I made a small change in the first chapter to make my intention a little clearer, which until now was left to the reader's interpretation. So you can reread it, it will be in the first paragraph.
I would like to thank the following readers for their support:
- Nanashi31
- reptiles_rule
- Nuckzy
- Manigold
- Ella_Montague
Sorry that the chapters aren't very long.
And since I'm a big liar, I hope you enjoy the next chapter. I forced myself to finish it before going to bed. I hope you like it.