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Chapter 12 - Author Note

Guys, I have received complaints about the story being too fast, especially in the beginning, how Haru's character hasn't been fleshed out, and people don't really care about him, especially in the kidnapping part. 

Moreover, a lot of the first 10 chapters kind of feel like an info dump, which is true, irrespective of my intention of me wanting to keep a bit of mysterious vibe. 

Alright, I have considered this, and I feel like I can correct the above flaws with most of the people being satisfied. 

Don't worry, I am not going to change the contents of these 11 chapters. I don't think you guys will appreciate rereading the updated part and I don't have the energy to rewrite that. 

My idea is that, instead of starting from the kidnapping, I will start from the first day of the Forest Camp arc, and write toward the kidnapping incident that happened, which I think would take me at most 3 chapters to flesh out Haru's character, quirk and other relevant info. 

I was anyway planning to do that in the Provisional License arc or the time after that, but instead it would be done there. So, for you guys, there would be still new content. 

One small change in the previous plot would be that, instead of Haru awakening his memories just waking up to the kidnapping, he would be doing it on the first day of Camp Arc. 

This doesn't change the bonus chapter or weekly schdule, as I request you guys to check the chapters at the top, instead of the last one from tomorrow. 

Next chapter would be coming tomorrow. 

Bonus Chapter Goal: 33/100

If you have any ideas for the character interactions and some plot detail, you would want in the beginning chapters, let me know. 

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