Do you guys think that i should rewrite the story, there's been alot of mistakes i made that impact the story early and i really want to make this story good cause i have alot of ideas for it and iceman as an ability is pretty sick so yeah but i'm not really sure yet.
The mc and his family could possibly change but the core concept is going to be the same thing and the rewrite shouldn't take too long as if you guys do want a rewrite i'll start writing it by tommrow but it's all up to you, i'll give this like 24 hours.