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Chapter 16: The River of What Remains

The river did not shine.

That was the first thing Lucian noticed.

Every record, every rumor, every exaggerated account described the River of Purity as something radiant—silver light, divine brilliance, water so clear it reflected the soul. None of them mentioned how quiet it was.

Not silent.

Quiet.

The kind of quiet that came after something had already been decided.

Lucian stood at the edge of the river, boots planted on stone polished smooth by time and flowing water. The current moved without disturbance, without urgency, as if it had no reason to hurry. The surface reflected the trees above only faintly, distorting them into elongated shadows that drifted downstream and vanished.

Behind him, the squad did not speak.

They didn't need to.

Every one of them could feel it now—that subtle pressure resting just beneath the skin, not pushing, not pulling, simply present. It wasn't hostile. It wasn't welcoming.

It was honest.

"This is it…" Daren muttered under his breath.

No one mocked him for breaking the silence.

Marek swallowed. "The River of Purity."

Lucian did not correct them.

Names were irrelevant here.

The air near the river was different from the rest of the Spirit Forest. Not lighter. Not safer. Just… stripped. As if something had been removed long before they arrived.

Lucian felt his Spirit Resonance respond.

Not with excitement.

Not with hunger.

With calm recognition.

For the first time since entering the forest, the pressure that weighed on the squad shifted. It didn't disappear—but it softened, as if the forest itself had leaned back slightly.

Sel noticed it immediately.

"The mana…" he whispered. "It's not pressing down anymore. It's… passing through."

Lucian nodded. "This place doesn't reject."

He paused.

"It removes."

The river moved.

Not suddenly.

Not violently.

The current slowed, then widened, spreading just enough that the water reached the stone at Lucian's feet. The temperature shifted—cool, but not cold. Clean, but not comforting.

Something beneath the surface stirred.

Not a voice.

Not a presence.

More like awareness brushing against the surface of thought.

Lucian stepped aside.

"Enter," he said.

He did not say who.

Kael Vorn moved first.

The scarred man didn't hesitate. He removed his gauntlets, set his shield aside, and stepped into the river without ceremony. The water climbed to his knees, then his waist, then his chest.

At first, nothing happened.

Then Kael's breath hitched.

His muscles tightened—not in preparation, but resistance. His scars burned, not as pain, but as memory. Old wounds, improperly healed fractures, damage accumulated over decades of survival—all of it surfaced at once.

Kael clenched his fists.

The river did not heal him.

It took.

Residue peeled away from his body like rust stripped from iron. The process was slow, deliberate, and merciless. Kael's knees buckled as the weight he had carried for years—hidden beneath muscle and endurance—was dragged out of him.

He did not scream.

He breathed.

When the river finally receded, Kael collapsed to one knee, chest heaving.

He looked the same.

But when he stood again, something had changed.

His presence was denser now, grounded in a way that felt permanent. Not stronger in motion—but harder to move.

Lucian observed silently.

Kael had not been given anything.

He had been returned to what he should have been.

Ravel entered next.

Unlike Kael, the river met him gently. The water rose only to his waist, then stopped. Ravel frowned slightly—then froze as pressure settled somewhere deeper than flesh.

Doubt surfaced.

Not memories of failure.

Memories of hesitation.

Moments when he had known what to do—but waited. When he had softened decisions to avoid responsibility. When he had survived by letting others decide first.

The river did not condemn him.

It stripped those moments bare.

Ravel staggered as the impurities of indecision were pulled from him, leaving behind something leaner, sharper, and colder. His breath came uneven when he stepped out, but his eyes were steady.

Lucian saw it clearly.

Ravel would no longer hesitate when it mattered.

Joren followed.

The river did not soften for him.

It compressed.

Joren's posture stiffened as the water reached his chest. His breath slowed, his expression tightening as rigidity—excess discipline, obedience taken to extremes—was peeled away.

The process was brief.

Brutal.

When Joren stepped out, his stance was still straight—but no longer brittle. His discipline had been refined, not erased.

Sel was next.

The river hesitated.

Just for a moment.

Then surged.

Sel screamed.

Not from pain—but from loss.

Mana impurities tore through his circulation like blades, ripping out inefficient habits, forced shortcuts, half-understood techniques he had relied on without knowing why they worked.

Sel collapsed face-first into the shallow water.

Lucian did not move.

Serah did.

Lucian stopped her with a raised hand.

"Wait."

The river withdrew on its own.

Sel lay unconscious, breath shallow but steady.

Something inside him had been stripped down to its core.

Whether he could rebuild properly… remained to be seen.

Mirel laughed as she stepped forward.

Not because she wasn't afraid.

Because fear was familiar.

The river resisted her.

Then pressed harder.

Her body trembled as instability—half-balanced foundations, conflicting cultivation methods—was dragged into the open. The river did not correct them.

It exposed them.

Mirel bit down until blood ran from the corner of her mouth, refusing to cry out. When she staggered back onto the shore, shaking and smiling weakly, Lucian knew the truth.

She had been given no mercy.

Only clarity.

The twins entered together.

The river separated them immediately.

Lysa flowed with it, impurities washing away smoothly—restlessness, impatience, scattered focus. She emerged lighter, calmer, more grounded.

Lune resisted.

The river did not punish him.

It sharpened him instead.

When he stepped out, his gaze was unnervingly precise.

They no longer mirrored each other.

The river had made sure of that.

Others followed.

Some endured.

Some barely did.

One—Iven—felt nothing at all.

The water passed him by without reaction.

Lucian did not comment.

Not everyone carried something worth awakening.

Finally, Lucian stepped forward.

The river parted.

The water did not rise.

It flowed around him, gentle and unobtrusive, as if acknowledging something already aligned.

Lucian felt no pain.

No purification.

No change.

His Spirit Resonance remained steady, untouched.

This place had nothing to take from him.

Lucian stepped back onto dry stone.

The river resumed its quiet flow.

Lucian turned to the squad.

"What you felt," he said calmly, "was not a gift."

No one interrupted.

"It was the removal of what did not belong to you."

Some of them were shaking.

Some were exhausted.

Some looked lost.

Lucian did not comfort them.

"Rest," he said. "Tomorrow, you learn what remains."

The Spirit Forest watched.

And this time—

It did not interfere.

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