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Chapter 28 - CHAPTER 28: CASE 4 OPENING – THE CHARMING PATIENT

CHAPTER 28: CASE 4 OPENING – THE CHARMING PATIENT

The whiteboard is already half-full when I arrive Monday morning. House stands at the center like a conductor, marker squeaking against the surface as he lists symptoms I don't recognize yet.

"Seizures. Personality changes. Memory lapses." He taps each word for emphasis. "And the most dangerous symptom of all—everyone who knows him thinks he's wonderful."

I grab coffee from the pot, letting the familiar bitterness wake my senses. Cameron enters behind me, and we exchange the briefest of glances—acknowledgment without display. Professional distance.

"Who is he?" Foreman flips through a file. "John Marcus, forty-two, CEO of a logistics company. Wife called 911 when he started seizing during dinner."

"Seizures started six weeks ago," House adds. "Subtle personality changes—wife noticed he's 'not himself' but couldn't articulate how. Business partners say he's 'more intense.' Friends think he's just stressed."

I scan the file. Marcus's medical history is unremarkable—no previous neurological issues, no trauma, no drug use. The personality changes interest me more than the seizures.

"Tumor?" Cameron suggests.

"First thing we'll rule out." House limps toward the door. "But here's the fun part—this patient is universally adored. Every single person who knows him describes him as 'the nicest man.' His employees love him. His wife worships him. His neighbors bring him casseroles."

"That's not a symptom," Foreman says.

"It's a warning sign." House's eyes flick to me. "Chase, you're on patient interview. Figure out what's under all that charm."

Marcus is in room 412. His wife, Sarah, sits beside the bed, holding his hand with the devoted intensity of someone who's never questioned her marriage. She's in her late thirties, well-dressed, with the careful makeup of a woman who presents perfectly even in crisis.

The patient himself is... unsettling.

John Marcus has a face built for trust. Open expression, easy smile, the kind of effortless warmth that makes strangers feel like old friends. He shakes my hand firmly when I introduce myself, maintaining eye contact just long enough to seem genuine without being aggressive.

"Doctor Chase. Good to meet you." His voice is smooth, modulated. "Sarah's been worried sick. I keep telling her it's nothing serious."

"Seizures are always serious, Mr. Marcus." I pull up a chair. "I'd like to go through your history if that's okay."

"Of course. Whatever helps."

I begin the standard questions—family history, medications, recent changes in routine. Marcus answers readily, his wife occasionally interjecting to add details he's "too modest" to mention. He's charming. Attentive. Perfectly composed for a man who seized hard enough to crack a tooth.

And my lie detection is completely silent.

Not a single ring. Not one flicker of deception.

This should be reassuring. Patients lie constantly—about drinking, about drugs, about the affair that exposed them to pathogens. Marcus isn't lying.

But something is wrong.

I ask about his relationship with his wife. "Eighteen years," he says warmly. "Best decision I ever made."

No ringing. He believes it.

"Any recent arguments? Stress at home?"

"We never fight." His hand covers hers. "I'm a lucky man."

Still nothing. But Sarah's expression flickers—just for a second—before settling back into adoration. She wants to believe him. Maybe she does. But something in her posture suggests a history of convincing herself.

"Work stress?" I try. "Running a company must be demanding."

"My employees are family. We take care of each other."

The words are perfect. Too perfect. Like a script he's rehearsed so many times it's become truth.

I think about the Rebecca Adler case—my first real diagnostic challenge in this body. Her lies rang clear because she knew she was hiding something. She was conscious of the deception.

Marcus isn't conscious of anything.

He genuinely believes he's a good husband, a good employer, a good man. The sincerity is absolute. But sincerity isn't truth. A person can believe something with complete conviction and still be wrong.

Antisocial personality disorder presents exactly like this. Charm without depth. Relationships that benefit the charmer. Genuine inability to perceive the difference between self-serving behavior and kindness.

But APD doesn't cause seizures.

I excuse myself and head to the imaging suite. House is already there, reviewing the MRI with the intensity of a chess master analyzing a board.

"Found something." He points to the frontal lobe. "Small mass. Probably benign, but it's pressing on the orbital frontal cortex."

"That would explain the personality changes."

"Would it?" House's eyes narrow. "Or would it explain why we're finally noticing them?"

The question lands harder than expected. The orbital frontal cortex governs impulse control, social behavior, emotional regulation. A tumor there could cause personality changes—or it could simply remove the filters that masked existing traits.

"You think he was always like this?"

"I think nobody's this perfect without hiding something." House turns to face me fully. "You spent twenty minutes with him. What did you see?"

I consider my answer carefully. "He didn't lie. Not once."

"Everyone lies."

"He didn't." I pause. "But he also didn't seem to... feel anything. Everything he said was correct—loving husband, devoted employer—but it was like watching a performance. The words were right. The emotion wasn't there."

House grins. The expression isn't pleasant. "Now you're seeing it."

Back in the conference room, the team debates. Cameron wants to focus on the tumor—remove it, see if personality normalizes. Foreman ran a background check and found sealed juvenile records, which is never a good sign. House is fascinated by the philosophical question: does the tumor create the behavior, or merely reveal it?

I stay quiet, turning over possibilities. If Marcus has always been this way—if the charm is a mask over something fundamentally wrong—then the tumor is almost incidental. A medical problem layered over a psychological one.

And my lie detection can't help me, because Marcus doesn't experience his manipulation as lies.

After the meeting disperses, I stay behind to review the file more thoroughly. The juvenile record can't be accessed directly, but sealed records usually mean something violent. Assault, maybe. Something bad enough that a judge agreed to protect his future.

His business history shows a pattern too. Partners who left under unclear circumstances. Employees who transferred to other companies with unusual haste. Nothing illegal—Marcus is too careful for that—but a trail of people who wanted distance from him.

I start building a timeline. Not for the medical record—that's House's domain. For myself. For understanding what I'm looking at.

Surgery is scheduled for tomorrow. The tumor comes out.

The question is what remains when it does.

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