Okay I have taken some time to think it over and I don't want to abandon this story.
However I still can see that this story isn't where I want it to be not can I be proud of it yet. So I've decided to rewrite the story however I want to take some time and really plan It out unlike I did with this novel before I begin writing and uploading. Now there will be changes that differ from this story I'll say what you can expect exactly bellow. I also want to thank you all for your support and ask that when this new storry begins you may give it a try.
What to expect
- more focus on character and there backstorys, motivations,and connections with hiruko as they grow
- It's still BL With Orochimaru as the love interest
- Still one peice System however the system will be different with a bit quicker of progression in rewords but not strength necessarily.
- more variety of rewords includeing DNA from other tribes, items, and traits from character
- A bigger focus on How this new Hiruko is different from the old one and his motivations and mindset and how it grows to change
- more chapters that build the connection between characters and tackle some anime past plot points or self created ones
- A focus on Fuinjutsu and Jutsu
- A bit more political stuff though not a lot since I'm not at the level to make it in a super enjoyable way at least not yet
- old Hiruko will still be a minor character like in this novel though he'll have a bit more relevance
- Lastly a bit more of a darker tone but still some light and warmth when it comes to scenes with family and friends
So yeah please try it out when it comes out most likey in about two weeks