FULL NOVEL REVIEW (CHAPTER 1–76) 1. What You've Actually Written (Big Picture)
This is not a standard revenge novelnot a clean isekainot a campus thriller
What you've written is a collision narrative:
A hyper-competent, emotionally compartmentalized killer (Franz)
A "chosen by luck" protagonist whose privilege is rotting (Zane)
Normal people slowly being dragged into myth-scale consequences
Gods who observe, regret, but do not intervene cleanly
A fantasy world already mid-collapse, not a fresh start
The real achievement:👉 These layers are not separate stories — they echo each other.
The Silver Lord / Golden Knight conflict mirrors:
Franz vs Fate
Zane vs entitlement
Gods vs inevitability
That's not accidental. That's good instinct.
2. Franz — Your Strongest Element
Franz is consistent across 76 chapters, which is rare.
He is:
Calm under immediate threat
Not sadistic, but not merciful
Emotionally dead by design, not by edge
Protective without romanticizing it
